I remember when I went through my critique, there were a few things that I needed to correct.
In concerns to timing, the overall speed of the letters fading in to the scene were partially off. I went back and corrected this for my final Critique.
Alignment took a little longer. "Ocha" and "Green Tea" needed to be aligned with the bottom and top of my logo so it felt consistent.
Finally, I was told to experiment with my coloring of my logo. I chose not to do that.
I remember during my creation phase, I did experiment with using brown and green together in the logo. It didn't work.